Added: Nov 19, 2008
From: YouIAmMusic
Duration: 3:6
Here's a new song I wrote to an instrumental by Emancipator called First Snow. Go check out his CD on itunes called "Soon it Will be Cold Enough to Build Fires". The original instrumental for First Snow is about 5 minutes, this is just a rap I wrote to the last part of the song. If this is good let me know and I'll make a whole song with the entire instrumental. So, hope you all enjoy! Leave comments, rate, subscribe, all that good stuff. Peace. Keep up.Lyrics:I feel my first chance is my last, so Im writing lines,On the bus on the back of my notecards for class,Or on the palm of my hand, anywhere to spew my mind, Real rhymes, rewrite, rewind, loop the beat one more timeOr a line popped to mind, find my pen and write, No lie, steal a tag off the wine, spill the bottle, crash, Occupation of rhymes, store clerk runnin to find,Myself inking my mind in the middle of aisle 9Dedicated to openly fiddle his vision., Please hand this kid a fuckin mic, And hear him vocally riddle his mission, Words vindicated, leaving bits of crippled, listenExtra ordinary, simple complex of human coronary,Hearts desire or Cinderella story, busted capillary, Devastation and misery, complication of historyFinding hip hops killer is not a mystery I'm a visionary piece the frame through sick flow,The audience; canvas, my voice; Picasso, This beats the paint, my mics the brush,Hear my voice speed rush, feel the lust,Feed the buyer, now hear the last lines...Its a race to the end of all times, fuel flames through ill rhymes,Fans screaming through the streets on fire...Tonight's my night, one chance to find my mind,If not, I go back to write rhymes,Everybodys found the light, maybe one day Ill find mine,On a stage, behind a stand and mic.
Channel: Music
Tags: beats emancipator hiphop music rap surfing
Rating: 4.71 (7 ratings) Views: 443' favoriteCount='7 Comments: 7
PMiddy001 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - Couldn't be better! 5 stars
nmunmnm Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - THATS WHATS UP!!!!
xansx Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - my nigga kimbo aka nmunmnm said it best...great work!
jpstewy Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - Im guessing this is Mustafa??!haha nice rymes man
city0fj Says:
Nov 23, 2008 - yo dope shit, your rhymes are complex... all you need on here (also wat i need to do) is have a chorus, and come back. i, and im sure other ppl, wanna hear more. do another track with chorus and 3 verses. go hard son i like ur rhymes .1
peteraustinnoto Says:
Nov 25, 2008 - Happy Thanksgiving
YouIAmMusic Says:
Nov 25, 2008 - uh thanks, you too
makezmuzic Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - Excellent!